Still, she is glad to know (for somehow, suddenly she knows) that it is possible to stop living. There is comfort in facing the full range of options; in considering all your choices, fearlessly and without guile. She imagines Virginia Woolf, virginal, unbalanced, defeated by the impossible demands of life and art; she imagines her stepping into a river with a stone in her pocket. Laura keeps stroking her belly. It would be as simple, she thinks, as checking into a hotel. It would be as simple as that.
The Hours by Michael Cunningham

I've found myself, recently, adopting writing styles. First it was The Green Mile by Stephen King — straightforward, and somewhat brutal. Suddenly now, it's The Hours and this ethereal, airy, graceful and much more philosophical style emerges — that, contrary to the dark, bleak Green Mile, seems to portray the joys of life, even in sadness instead of the other way around. Some examples exist in the full article, which I had time to edit on paper thanks to my legal pads¹.

Inspired excerpts from Ventura

“Credera,” he started, but then was silenced by a quick motion of Roena’s hand.

“I bid you gratitude for your patience, Herald,” she said sharply, taking the scroll from him, and studied, for the briefest moment, the crimson ribbon that clenched it so firmly in place. At one end, the threads were smooth and connected; she traced her finger over them, and smiled (perhaps it was a smile) at her curiosity. At the other end, the threads had become frayed, and she barely had to pull at the ribbon for the string to come unraveled. She let it fall, devoid of the slightest innocence; an object of passion, obscuring the quest for knowledge.

The young woman sits near the remains of a sun-kissed riverbed. She runs her hand through tall blades of yellowed grass. She is borne on an exultant wind, part of a sky that does not seem to end or does not want to.

A merchant had left his cart somewhere in the middle of a narrow street, leaning against an alley wall, discomfited - for there was no way of moving it — in its solitude. It bothered him, somehow, this disorder. It bothered him that some people had the liberty to do as they pleased, and others could merely watch. In one hand exists those who live, and in the other, all who have died and can only watch the proceedings of the world from without — it was like that, he decided, like life coupled with a hand of death, inescapable until the pinnacle of understanding where they met. Suddenly everything was clear; suddenly, everything was gone.

So, I suppose the lesson here is: don't give me good books; I will be too heavily influenced by them.

Footnotes

  1. Concerning legal pads: I have to add, the very fact that I do half my work on legal pads makes me much more effective at doing work. Legal paper is not going to cry out at you if you waste it. It has lines, it's colorful (so you won't lose it), and it's long so you won't have to constantly flip back and forth through pages. Unfortunately, the bottom of my legal pad is now crinkled, my pretty pink notebook (which I started writing in with such vigor) is now somewhat sparsely used, and I have to personally ask every one of my teachers if they accept legal paper. Most say yes, but I'm prepared for the exceptions. «

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Manda said:

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I remember when I was in junior high and wrote a lot of stories and such, I always shaped my writing style after the current book I was reading… it was my way of finding my own “voice”, or my own “style.” Now, I don’t even have time to read a book, let alone write, thanks to schoolwork!

I can’t remember the last time I wrote anything on a legal pad, everything at my school must be typed. Hmmmmm…

Posted on September 23, 2006 12:36 PM; Permalink

Kriss said:

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“The Hours” remains one of my all-time favorite books… have you also read “Mrs. Dalloway,” which inspired it?

I remember after I read those books, I wrote in a similar style for about a year. Luckily, I grew out of it. It seems to happen with any good book, true.

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Yvonne said:

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I reall like that style. Its very eloquent and something I think I’d like to aspire to adopt.

Posted on September 25, 2006 11:23 AM; Permalink

Biscuitrat said:

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Oh, I’d love to read Mrs. Dalloway. Life; London; this moment of June. Beautiful. I don’t ever want to grow out of writing like that, but I know it’s going to happen the next time a good book rolls around.

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Ivory said:

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your writing style is very interesting to say the least. I love your site , and thanx for the comment. Hopefully My grandpa will pull through.. = )

Posted on September 25, 2006 5:25 PM; Permalink

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